Evidence by fix
Make the Screening Pack tangible by displaying an anonymised example on the employers page
Critical severity · flagged by Copy & Conversion Strategist
Observed — Visitors landed on the employers page and saw the term 'Screening Pack' mentioned 6+ times, but could not visualise what the deliverable actually contained. They could not see what a hiring manager would receive, how recommendations were structured, or what evidence looked like. Without this tangible example, they could not confidently determine whether the service was suitable for their needs, and they abandoned the page.
Inferred — Prospects cannot confidently assess whether Example's output matches their needs because the site withholds the most persuasive proof point available: a concrete example of what they will receive. This creates decision paralysis, they understand the problem Example solves but cannot visualise the solution.
“'Screening Pack' mentioned 6+ times but never defined or shown on this page”
Observed on: /employers
Frameworks: MECLABS, Cialdini
Provide transparent pricing guidance to reduce affordability uncertainty
Critical severity · flagged by Copy & Conversion Strategist
Observed — Visitors landed on the employers page and looked for pricing information. They found none. Without understanding the financial commitment, they could not assess affordability or budget fit. They could not confidently justify time investment in a sales conversation. They abandoned the page.
Inferred — Prospects cannot assess affordability or budget fit without pricing guidance. In B2B services, absence of pricing signals either hidden costs or lack of confidence in value. This creates hesitation and prevents prospects from moving forward.
“Add pricing or cost guidance on a dedicated page or in the enquiry flow—even 'custom pricing starting at £X' or 'typical engagement £X-£Y' removes a major hesitation barrier. Currently absent entirely, forcing prospects to commit to a conversation before understanding affordability.”
Observed on: /employers
Frameworks: MECLABS, Cialdini
Supplement founder credibility with outcome-focused case studies demonstrating successful hiring outcomes
High severity · flagged by Mobile-First User
Observed — Visitors saw founder credibility signals (conference speaking images, engineering background) and one customer testimonial, but could not see evidence that someone like them had achieved successful outcomes using Example. They could not confidently determine whether the service would work for their specific hiring situation. They hesitated and abandoned the page.
Inferred — Prospects need reassurance that someone like them was looked after and achieved successful outcomes. Founder credibility and organisational signals establish that the business exists and is legitimate. However, they do not answer the question that drives conversion: 'Will this service work for my specific hiring situation?' This requires proof from other customers, evidence from customers in similar positions.
“About page establishes founder credibility but provides no proof from other customers or customer outcomes. Action: develop 1-2 case studies from named enterprise clients that show the hiring outcome achieved.”
Frameworks: MECLABS, Cialdini
Define 'practitioners' and explain their credentials and expertise on the About page
High severity · flagged by Non-Technical Buyer
Observed — Visitors encountered the term 'practitioners' used 8+ times without definition. They could not understand who these people were, what their credentials were, or why their expertise mattered for technical validation. Without this clarity, they could not confidently assess the quality of the validation process. They abandoned the page.
Inferred — Prospects cannot assess the quality of the validation process because they do not understand who performs it or what their credentials are. The term 'practitioners' is used repeatedly but never explained. This creates cognitive friction and reduces decision confidence.
“Explain who 'practitioners' are on the 'For Employers' or 'About' page—include credentials, background, and why their expertise matters for technical validation. Use photos and names where possible. Currently the term is used 8+ times without definition.”
Frameworks: CLT, Plain Language
Clarify the screening process timeline and scope to reduce process uncertainty
High severity · flagged by Copy & Conversion Strategist
Observed — Visitors landed on the employers page and read about the screening process, but could not find information about how long it takes from 'bring us a role' to 'receive shortlist'. They could not assess whether the timeline matched their hiring urgency. Without this clarity, they could not confidently determine whether Example was suitable for their needs. They abandoned the page.
Inferred — Prospects cannot assess whether Example's timeline matches their hiring urgency because the site does not explain how long the screening process takes. This creates uncertainty about process fit and prevents confident decision-making.
“No clear indication of how long the screening process takes (timeline from 'bring us a role' to 'receive shortlist')”
Observed on: /employers
Frameworks: MECLABS, Cialdini
Reposition the candidate-side value proposition above the fold to increase candidate engagement
Medium severity · flagged by Copy & Conversion Strategist
Observed — Candidates landed on the /open-roles page and saw a generic job board interface with job listings. They did not see the differentiator, that Example reviews CVs by engineers and does not mass-mail applications, until after scrolling past multiple job listings. Without understanding why Example is different, they could not confidently assess whether the platform was worth exploring. They abandoned the page.
Inferred — Candidates cannot quickly understand why Example is different from a generic job board because the differentiator is buried below the fold. This creates hesitation and reduces engagement.
“Value prop is below the fold — candidates don't see why Example is different until after scrolling past job listings. Rewrite the hero section to lead with the candidate benefit: 'Your CV reviewed by engineers, never mass-mailed. Apply to roles that actually fit your skills.' This should appear ABOVE the job listings.”
Observed on: /open-roles
Frameworks: MECLABS, Cialdini
Increase navigation link touch targets to meet mobile usability standards
Medium severity · flagged by Mobile-First User
Observed — Mobile users attempted to click navigation links that were 28 pixels tall and tightly spaced. The touch targets were too small, causing misclicks and frustration. Users had to retry clicks multiple times before successfully navigating. This friction reduced engagement and increased abandonment on mobile devices.
Inferred — Mobile users experience friction when attempting to navigate because touch targets are undersized. This reduces engagement and increases abandonment on mobile devices.
“Consent checkbox on /validate-a-role is 18×18 pixels (critical touch target failure). one page explicitly notes this as high concern. Recommendation: Increase checkbox size to minimum 24×24 pixels and add clear label text. This is a legal and usability requirement for form accessibility.”
Frameworks: Mobile-Friendly, WCAG 2.1
Journeys behind the findings
Mobile-First User
· Won’t convert Example has built a clean, mobile-responsive website that clearly communicates its value proposition across multiple audience segments (employers, candidates, validators). The navigation and content hierarchy work well on mobile devices. However, the site relies entirely on organisational clarity a...
First-Time Customer
· Won’t convert Example's homepage effectively communicates the core value proposition—reducing screening workload and improving conversion rates—and the employers page clarifies the operational process. However, the website relies entirely on unsubstantiated claims and organisational credibility signals while omi...
Trust & Security Buyer
· Won’t convert Example establishes founder credibility and operational clarity through its positioning as an engineer-led recruitment platform with named enterprise clients. However, the website pursues a trust-through-expertise strategy while remaining silent on the security and compliance concerns that drive pu...
Non-Technical Buyer
· Won’t convert Example has built a website that clearly articulates the hiring pain (wasted senior time on unqualified candidates) and positions itself as the solution. However, the site repeatedly uses unexplained jargon ('Screening Pack', 'technical validation', 'practitioner') and withholds critical decision-m...
SEO Conversion Audit
· Won’t convert Example has built a two-sided marketplace: one side recruits candidates through a candidate-first job board (high conversion intent), the other recruits employers through founder credibility and engineering-led differentiation (low conversion intent). The employer-facing strategy relies heavily on...
Copy & Conversion Strategist
The site establishes founder credibility and clear value metrics, but withholds the two pieces of information that drive B2B conversion: a tangible example of what the customer actually receives, and transparent pricing or cost guidance. Prospects cannot confidently move forward without seeing the S...
How the simulation works
Each persona is a testing agent with a defined protocol — explicit goals, evaluation criteria and stopping conditions — exploring the site in a real browser. A persona can only comment on pages and elements it actually reached during its journey.
Confidence in a fix is earned through corroboration: independent personas finding the same issue, behavioural signals (hesitation, backtracking, goal abandonment) observed at the relevant steps, and repeatability across runs. Where evidence was insufficient, the report says so rather than overstating.